After deciding not to use my original design for my poster, i decided to move the elements around to create 2 other variations. I printed them out on A3 to get a sense of what they would look like printed. I found the same problem with both as i did for the original, they don’t look bold enough for a poster. Neither of the designs have a sense of hierarchy within them and are both too structured, with the text on one side and the image on the other. The design needs to be more chaotic and unstructured. I also need to take more influence from Futurism as the image of Futurism within the designs do not describe it well enough.
Ben Jackson 